...uh huh...@_@...you scare me. *tickles* But I'll read on...figured the ending was coming. Not a whole lot to say. I can see how this came from an RP. It's not really my taste but I would offer this. There's a lot of reflection and talk about being owned and controlled. But it comes across as a little abstract without any conflict...or reaction or response to it. I'd like to see the push and shove of controlling...countering perhaps...there are nice little lines and moments but as a whole...it feels more like the "mistress's" soliloquy than a conversation. That probably comes because it was done in RP. So it's fine for what it is I guess. That's about all the critique I have to offer. It's nicely written from adaptation but I'd like to see more back and forth feeling ^^. All my best.